Kia ora Jayde, I like how you've used similes and comparisons in your poetry, it makes it very effective. Do you have a title for your poem? I wonder if you could change the colour of your font so that it's easier to read on the background. Keep up the great blogging, Whaea Ocea
Kia ora Jayde, I like how you've used similes and comparisons in your poetry, it makes it very effective. Do you have a title for your poem? I wonder if you could change the colour of your font so that it's easier to read on the background.
ReplyDeleteKeep up the great blogging,
Whaea Ocea